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Tuesday, 27 November 2012

This is my Bio poem: Nicky

Nicky

Is: Thoughtful, creative, caring and helpful

Daughter of: Joanna and Robert

Sister of: Caitlin and Jaccob

Lover of: Volleyball, gymnastics, family, beaches and cooking.

Who feels: Relaxed after a long book, emotional when I leave a lot of my friends from my school, loved by my family.

Who gives: Thoughtful gifts to most of my family and friends when around Christmas or their birthday, believe in God, respect to my friends and family.

Who fears: looking at spiders and bugs, failing tests, when my mum and brother fight.

Who would like to see: Heaven, the Eiffel tower, Christmas in the park.

Who lives: Auckland, New Zealand.

Douglas



                                                                

Friday, 16 November 2012

Here's my reflection on my art: Nicky


Art: Reflecting on my Abstract Painting

1. Are you pleased with your abstract painting? why / why not?
I am really pleased with my painting and yet not pleased. The reason for that

is, the green colour is not the kind I would usually use.

2. What did you find easy when you created your abstract painting?
I found tracing around the plate onto my 6 by 6 cm grid really easy.

3. What part did you find tricky when you were creating your abstract painting? -think about painting, ruling it up etc.
I found Painting the square in the centre of the circle a bit hard, other than that everything was a piece of cake.

4. Who / What helped you when you were painting?
Miss Paton helped me alot with painting my painting.

5. What would you do differently next time? Think about: colours, painting, ruling of grid, etc.
I would chose different colours.

6. What frustrated you when you created your abstract painting?
Trying to paint within the lines, and making the right colours for each shape.



That's me! I admire my picture.

This is a comment I made to Quaid: Nicky

Hello again, this is another comment I made on a blog.


Thursday, 15 November 2012

Wednesday, 14 November 2012

This is a comment I made to room 8: Nicky









Today on November 14, Wednesday My class and the rest of the school went up to Sylvia Park plus we got to sit in Hoyts. So we / Panmure Bridge school got to watch a whole lot of Maniakali films.
I had a wonderful time. 

My presentation on Valentines Day: Nicky








This is our ( Pace and me / Nicky ) presentation. As you can see, that there's a lot of red, you  know what that means! Do you know? Anyway, our presentation is all about Valentines Day. Pace and I / Nicky asked ourselves heaps of questions that we really wanted to know about. I hope you learn as much as my partner and I did as you : )         .

Friday, 9 November 2012

What I need to work on: Nicky


Topic Presentation: RubricPresenter: _Nicola_________________________
 
Assessor
:
Deziree____________________
Crtieria
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Loud clear voicePresenter speaks in a soft voice e.g. whisper. May mumble during presentation. Words / sentences are very unclear and may not be understood by the audience.Presenter’s voice maybe very clear in some of the presentation, but may revert back to soft / mumbling voice. Not all words / sentences may not be understood by the audience.Projects voice in most parts, but may mumble, or speak softly in 1-2 sentences / words. Most words are understood by the audience.Projects voice throughout the performance. Voice is loud and clear. Every word / sentence is understood by the audience.

Eye contactNo eye contact is given to the audience.The presenter refers to cue cards. The presenter refers to the slide and reads off the slide resulting in some eye contact given to the audience, but not much.  The presenter looks at the audience and gives eye for most of the presentation. Cue cards are referred to for some of the presentation.Eye contact is given throughout the presentation. The presenter gives eye contact to the audience throughout the entire presentation.

Knowledge of TopicInformation is not known. Presenter freezes on the spot and relies on his / her team to rescue them through their slide / presentation. There are not any cue cards used.Information is read off the screen. Cue cards are referred to throughout the presentation. There is no extra / expanded information.Some information off the slides is memorised and is learnt off by heart. Cue cards are occasionally referred to during the presentation. Presenter expands on information by giving a few examples.Information is memorised and is learnt off by heart. Cue cards are not referred to during the presentation. Presenter expands on information by giving lots of examples.

Slide LayoutFont is difficult to read against the background colour. The Font itself is very hard to read. Pictures do not relate to the question/s being asked. There is an imbalance of pictures and writing, e.g. Too many pictures on the entire slide. There are spelling, grammar and typing errors on the slide.
4 or more errors on the
slide.
Some of the font is difficult to read against the background colour. Some pictures relate and other pictures don’t to the question asked. There is an imbalance of pictures and writing in some parts of the slide. There are some spelling, grammar and typing errors on the slide. 3 errors on the slide.The majority of the font is easy to read against background colour. The font is easy to read, but hard to read in some areas of the slide. Most pictures relate to the question being asked. There are a few spelling, grammar and typing errors on slide.
1-2 errors.  
All the font is easy to read against the background colour. Writing is easy to read. Pictures are appropriate the question being asked.  
There is an excellent balance of writing and pictures on the slide. There are not any spelling, grammar or typing errors on the slide.
Summarising of informationInformation is copied from sources.  This is obvious as there is a lot  of copying and pasting.
This is throughout the entire presentation.
Some information is copied.  This is sh. own through 3-4 slides
Information is difficult to understand as this is not in the child’s language
Most information is put into own words. Only 1-2 slides have copied information. This maybe due to the context of topic and the lack of personal experience.  Information is put in own words. Language is easy to understand.
Sources of informationUses 1 source of information, e.g. a websiteUses 2 sources of information e.g. 2 websites or 1 website and a book, 2 books usedUses 3 sources of information which may include books, websitesUses four or more sources of information which includes websites, books
Referencing of informationMaterial is not referenced. This is not displayed at the end of the presentationSome material is referenced, not quite finishedMost material is referenced. This includes websites and books.Material is referenced, URL’s are included. Book’s and websites are referenced. APA referencing is used.


Hi. Today ( 9.11.12 ) Pace and I had to present our presentation on Valentines day. My awesome teacher, Miss Paton sent her class including me a little page about if we have done all of these things such as: Referencing of information,  sources of information, Summarising of information, slide layout, knowledge of the topic, eye contact and loud clear voice.

I think that I need to work on slowing down my speech, a little more eye contact, and learning everything that I need to say.